Friday, December 1, 2006

Moments

Not the person I was the moment before you said hello…
It was sunny
Not the person I was before we slept together for the first time…
It was rainy
Not the person I was before you took your last breath…
It was cold

Wanting more
Needing more

Wanting to go back
Stepping forward instead
It was lonely

2 comments:

openeyes said...

There is so much longing and so much pain here, all expressed in a wonderful, creative way way. love the last line, it says so much.

The Romantic Flea said...

again you are too kind....This is all so new for me...I am finding the journey a very opening one..I guess what they say is true ....it is the broken and cracked places that allow the light to enter